Showing posts with label elsa. Show all posts
Showing posts with label elsa. Show all posts

Thursday, March 25, 2010

Evaluation - Audience screen test

We asked 5 people the following :

- how would you rate the opening out on ten?
A-5
B-8
C-6
D-7
E-6

- did you clearly understand what was going on in the opening ?
A-Yes
B-yes
C-yes
D-yes
E-tes

- if not ? what did you think was going on ?
A-.
B-.
C-.
D-.
E-.

- do you think that the opening fitted in with the thriller genre?
A-Yes
B-Yes
C-Yes
D-Yes
E-Yes

- did you think the audio track created the right atmosphere within the piece?
A-Yes
B-Yes
C-Yes
D-Yes
E-Yes

-do you think the heartbeat helped build tension wihin the piece?
A-yes
B-no
C-yes
D-yes
E-yes

- did the audio help you understand what was going on ?
A-Yes
B-Yes
C-Yes
D-Yes
E-Yes

- would you want to watch the rest of the movie?
A-Yes
B-Yes
C-Yes
D-Yes
E-Yes

-did the lighting help create atmosphere within the piece?
A-yes
B-yes
C-yes
D-es
E-yes

- what did you think of the way the main character was portrayed?
A-Weak
B-Good
C-seemed true
D-Very good
E-realistic

- what did you think of the credits ?
A-Good
B-Good
C-Good
D-Good
E-Good


- do you think the lighting helped create the right atmosphere within the opening?
A-Darker
B-Needed to be darker
C-Needed to be darker
D-Darker
E-Darker

- what was the scariest moment in our thriller
A-the woman waking up in the shed
B-no monemt was that scary
C- the woman seeing something and screaming in the shed
D-when she is walking through the forest
E-When she wakes up in the shed

How could we improve our thriller?

Thicker forest,
Darker,
Have hood down in shed,

Tuesday, March 23, 2010

Elsa Evaluation

Our thriller incorporates some generic conventions for thriller films such as never seeing/not knowing who the bad guy is (in this case the stalker) We also used music in the minor key to create atmosphere and tension, a technique that is used in abundance in thriller films.
In our thriller we developed the convention of point of view shots from the stalker in order to develop this convention we used the steadiness and focus of the camera shots to show how the stalker was feeling to the audience. For example
In this clip as the camera is very unsteady and the shots are very out of focus due to the fast movements of the camera it shows that the stalker is very impatient and excited about something which makes the audience want to know what happening
As the opening to our thriller only includes one charac
ter the audience can see we did not represent a lot of social groups only women aged between 20 – 25.
Our thriller does represent gender in a stereotypical way by showing women as the protagonist and passive sex ending up as the victim (especially in stalker films) This however could be seen as a successful convention as many thriller films have done this such as
Our thriller would be produced and released as a TV movie. This is because it is inexpensively produced and it would only feature a small cast and it would not use very expensive special effects, which are all common traits of TV movies.
The visual style of our thriller is also lending to TV movie as the lighting effects are kept simple, as are the props and set.
This thriller also has opportunities for sequels, which would make even more profit.
The rating of this thriller would be a 15 however the target audience of the thriller would be older from 25 + of both genders. This is because our thriller will contain no 18 certificate material in the film such as gore, this means it will appeal to an old
er age range because of this and this would also mean it appeals more to women. Also I think the lack of expensive special effects within the film
mean that it would appeal to the older more mature audience rather than the younger audience. The older audience will also be able to appreciate the way the film makes you think about what’s happening and the way it allows them to try and draw their own conclusions before the film ending is shown.
In order to attract our target audience we used point of view shots from the stalker so that they feel like they have privileged knowledge of what’s going to hap
pen to the victim. It also allows them to see and feel like the stalker in order for the
m to try and figure out what he will do next.
The scenes where the woman is waking up in the shed and looking around at all the pictures of her would particularly scare the women in the audience as because it’s a point of view shot they are forced to put themselves in the position of the victim and feel the dread of realising they have been watched and the terror of wondering what’s going to happen to them next. This is also confirmed within our audience testing where 100% of the woman asked wrote that down as the scariest point within the thriller.

During the making of the thriller we learnt a lot about the different technologies and their strengths and weaknesses. The camera equipment we used was good although the cameras were not high definition and so did not pick up every detail.
The tripod was useful in helping create smooth panning and tilt shots. One of the problems we faced while filming was how the camera picked up the lighting. The beginning of our sequence was all shot in the day, however on the different locations the slightest change of light made the sky look a lot darker than in previous shots, however this was easily sorted out during the editing. One effect we managed to produce well in the film was the effect of the operator talking on the phone. In order to make this sound realistic we had to record someone’s voice on the end of a phone and impose it onto the film. One particular effect I found useful for creating the required mise-en-scene of our film was the colour correction tool. Our thriller was supposed to be set on a gloomy, over clouded day. However when we filmed it was very bright and the colours on our film were very vibrant. By using colour correction and de-saturating all the colours in the scene, taking out the whites and adding in more black tones I managed to create the right atmosphere in the scenes. De-saturation was the main effect, which helped to create a dull, eerie atmosphere. Our audience testing showed that 100 % of the people asked said that the lighting helped create the atmosphere and tension within the film.

Before colour correction
After colour correction





Garage band was a useful tool in the production of our thriller. We merged three tracks together and used the volume control to determine the volume of each track and specific points in the soundtrack. For example when we wanted the heart beat quiet in the background and then decreasing melody two and increasing the heartbeat volume when we wanted it to be more recognisable within the soundtrack. This was good as the audience testing showed that most people said that the increasing volume of the heartbeat built tension in the piece and helped build it towards the action.

One of the problems we faced using garage band was getting the timings correct in conjunction with our film.
Looking back at our preliminary task I feel that I have learnt a lot since producing it. Through research I have learnt a lot about the genre of thriller films and the effect different areas can have on the overall appearance of the film eg. Lighting and camera shots. The detailed planning of our thriller film helped to make it easier to produce as the storyboard helped us take all the correct shots and make sure they complied with the timings we had written down. During editing we had the storyboard stuck on the wall in front of us, which made it easier for me to cut the shots to the right timings and to arrange them in the correct order. It also made it easier to see which shots could be cut down if one shot went slightly over time.
Our use of specific shot types has improved, such as the match on action, which we did in our preliminary task, which was not very successful as the timing was not very good. However in out thriller we managed to do an excellent match on action in the editing when the woman is seen getting out of her car.
Throughout the project my confidence with the equipment has grown and I now feel that I can do proficient camera work and am very good at using final cut express and garage band to edit and add atmosphere to the film.
I believe that the end product we have produced is fulfilling the task we were set as we have remained within the genre of a thriller and not crossed over to horror. We have used different effects in order to create atmosphere, tension and understanding within our thriller and have used our research, which we conducted before filming to help us produce a thriller, which would appeal to our target audience.

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

audience testing questions

here are some possible questions we could ask at our audience testing

- how would you rate the opening out on ten?
- did you clearly understand what was going on in the opening ?
- if not ? what did you think was going on ?
- do you think think that the opening fitted in with the thriller genre?
- did you think the audio track created the right atmosphere within the piece?
- did the audio help you understand what was going on ?
- would you want to watch the rest of the movie?
- what did you think of the way the main character was portrayed?
- what did you think of the credits ?
- do you think the lighting helped create the right atmosphere within the opening?


these questions could help tell us what went well in our opening and what didnt

Tuesday, February 23, 2010

filming finished

We have finished filming and reshot a few scenes of the car broken down as the originals were wobbly and so we re-filmed them with a different tripod making sure it was stable.
now we can start editing properly.
We have now filmed in four sections :
the first was the car break down which everyone turned up to
the second was the shed scenes which again everyone turned up to
the third as the forest scenes which dean did not attend
the fourth was the re filming of the car break down which neither dean nor elsa (who had a hospital appointment) attended

Friday, February 12, 2010

Editing the shed scene

Today we edited the scenes form the shed, we cut out the scenes we didn't want and the scenes we kept we rearranged and put in order. We will be filming the last part of our opening on friday the 19th Feb.

Friday, February 5, 2010

second day of filming

On tuesday 2nd february Elsa, Hannah, Luke and Dean filmed the scenes in the shed. This went well and we managed to do all our camera techniques well. As it was raining at the time it added atmosphere to the filming and contributed to the atmosphere.

Tuesday, February 2, 2010

First day of filming !!

on Sunday the 31st. We went to the road location and filmed this section of our opening . It want well !! , we worked well and got all of the footage we needed, How ever when we used the tripod it was on unsteady ground and so the shot may be slightly wobbly. We are going to upload the footage to day and see if we need any more , we also took the stalker photos with her in different outfit and different locations . This afternoon we are planning on doing the shed scene , the props we need for this after noon we will need stalker photos , rope , and a gag.

Friday, January 29, 2010

music

this lesson we have gone through the music and started to edit it. We have chosen two uncopyrighted pieces and edited them together to create the piece we want to use within our opening. We have tried to create atmosphere within the music and have done this by using a range of different tempos and volumes at different times within the piece.

Thursday, January 28, 2010

Music Video

We have found some uncopyrighted music from HTTP://incopmetech.com/m/c/royalty-free/horror.

We have listened to them all and found that there were only parts of two that we could use. we will use garage band to edit the music so we can make it fit the film.

Lesson plan !

This lesson we have planned when we will be filming our thriller opening,
We will begin filming on Sunday the 31st at the road location , On the following tuesday we will be filming the shed scene.If we haven't got all of the filming done by then we can use the following sunday for extra filming time . After we have completed filming we will up load the footage to the computer and do some simple editing to see if we have all the footage we need , if not then we can use the following week to film some more .

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Sunday, January 24, 2010

Casting





These are the three people that we looked at to play the main part in our opening of a thriller. Each has different qualitys that we liked and needed, but in the end we could only pick one.

Jeannie.... Female 16 and has acting experience behind her. She has proven to be a good actress with good GCSE grade to back her up.

Olivia... Female 17 and she also has good acting experience behind her with good GCSE results.

Matt... Male, 17 has limited acting experience.

After looking at all 3, we desided what a female would best fit the role we wanted to fill, as it is normally a women that gets caught and is more vunrable than a man, you also feel more for a women, as they have less of a physical presence. So this ruled Matt out.
After talking about the two remaining girls, we desided to go for Jeannie. Olivia fitted the part perfectl but we felt that jeannie looked more innocent due to her small physical presence. (not saying Olivia looks manly :P) Jeannie had more of the qualitys that we needed.

Friday, January 22, 2010

music for piece

for the opening we are using many different sound effects and music. The music and sound effects we use must be un copyrighted and these are the sound effects and music we have found that could possibly be incorporated into our piece

The music we shall use must be uncopyrighted. For this reason we are using music off the website http://www.jamendo.com/en/tag/horror This is because all the music on this site is uncopyrighted and available for download legally. We will be using many different pieces of music in our thriller in order for the music to corespond with the action taking place on the screen

location photos - the shed.

For this location i had to find somewhere which was isloated or could be made to look isloated. I had to find a shed which enabled us to film easily and was big enough for the group to fit into.
For this location i found a shed which is directly opposite my house. It has a rundown look which would help and add to the feel of the movie. I have asked the owner if we would be able to use it and he has said yes. The shed is wooden. Because i live just across the road from the shed we wil be able to use heavy lighting to help create the effects we want. Because of the location of the shed it is easy to create the feeling of it being isolated.





The health and safety of this shed is minimal. Again we must make sure all our phones are chargedin case we need to contact someone. I have also checked that the shed is structurly sound and so will be safe to work in. We wil also have to wear warm clothes as the shed is very cold.

Location photos - car breakdown

For the location of the car breakdown we needed to find a road which loked as if it was not near civalisation. We also needed to find a road that was not busy so as to also show it wasnt near civealisation and also to make filming easier. The road needs to have a wood next to or near it as we need a place for the stalker to watch the woman (pov shots) and for her to go into the woods later on in the opening.
For this i have found a location. It is Debden road. I have chosen this as a good location becuase it is a quiet road and has layby wherewe can safely film the car without being an obstruction. Also there is a small wood by the side of the road which allows us to do the pov shots from the stalker and also to do the shots of the woman going into the woods.







Because this location is on a road we need to take lots of health and safety measures. We must make sure that we are not obstructing the road at any point during filming. We must also make sure that our phones are fully charged so as in case of emergency we can get hold of someone. I have already checked that phones get signal in this area. Because we are using a car we must take al the health and safety measures assosiated with a car, Such as making sure its not an obstruction. We must make sure that every member of the group knows al the health and safety measured before we start filming.

Wednesday, January 20, 2010

sound ideas for our film

In our film we will use a range of different sound techniqes to create different effects within our opening.
The music we use will be in the minor key as in most thriller films as it creates a sense of foreboding in the audience. We will use ambient sound to help establish whats going on a scene and to also create different effects.
We will use sound bridges during the credits and opening to show the audience that all the different scenes are related and to create a sense of movement within the film.
Duirng moments of suspense we could bring in the music and slowly increase the tempo and volume to show that it is leading up to something and create a feeling of suspese and fear within the audience.
We could use both non diagetic and diagetic sounds to create different emotions within the audience but also to show the different emotions of the characters on screen.

sound in films - research

Sound in films has developed over time from silent movies movies with music playing to full blown action movies with dialogue, music, sound effects and more.
There are many different types of sound in movies such as ambient sound (birds,traffic), diagetic sound (dialogue, footsteps) and non diagetic sound (music).
In thiller movies there is a high use of all these different types of sounds.
Sounds can be used to create different emotions within the audience such as suspence, happiness and anger.
For example a lack of music (non diegetic) and only a very small amount of ambient sound (such as a bird) can give the impression of being deserted, isolated and alone.
Music plays a big part in movies to control the emotion that the audience is feeling when watching the film. For example in a happy moment in the film very loud, upbeat music playing will also make the audience feel happy. Whereas a soft piece of music in the minor key can play a big part in thriller films as it gives the impression of fear and foreboding in the audience.
The volume and tempo of the music can also create emotions within the audience and in thriller films the use of increasing volume and tempo creates suspence in the audience and leads them into certain events happening within the film.

The use of sound bridges is also very useful in thriller films as it links two scenes together showing the audience that they are related or happening at the same time.Sound bridges could be with any type of sound including music, dialogue or ambient sound.
Sound bridges are often used in the openings of thriller films when there are lots of establishing shots and shots which may not nessasarilly mean anything to the audience this early in the film.

Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Lesson work

During this lesson we have done the story board of our ideas for the whole of the opening. The story board includes shot type, shot time, dialog, any camera movement and any additional lighting.

Thursday, January 14, 2010

Lesson work

We watch silence of them lambs, while watching it gave us the idea of someone being watch, and the way inwhich it would be filmed.

-Mixing diagetic and non diagetic sounds
-How and when to use establishing shots
-Use both tracking and back to show to create a greater effect
-Close up on boby parts to make points... eg the feet to show the speed